I find the last poster the most successful. the pop of red is clear and so is the type. I do wish you would have used the last collage that you posted (that included this main image)to incorporate into your poster. I think the lines within the collage would have lent themselves nicely to follow with type, and it was more visually interesting. But, sticking with this poster, I think that a clear color scheme needs to be in place, because the sepia tones are conflicting with the black and white. Maybe a transparent overlay of color? Also, Im not sure time needs to be patterned because its already a bit overwhelming. I do find the i of time clever, just make sure the point sits in the middle of the stack coming out of it. The typeface fits well with the industrial feel that you have going on. Your first poster is also looking interesting. I like that the i of time is nicely integrated into a repeating shape, and there is a good amount of white space. The one rectangular shape in the right side doesn't quite fit however, try changing it to another shape. overall looking good!
I find the last poster the most successful. the pop of red is clear and so is the type. I do wish you would have used the last collage that you posted (that included this main image)to incorporate into your poster. I think the lines within the collage would have lent themselves nicely to follow with type, and it was more visually interesting.
ReplyDeleteBut, sticking with this poster, I think that a clear color scheme needs to be in place, because the sepia tones are conflicting with the black and white. Maybe a transparent overlay of color? Also, Im not sure time needs to be patterned because its already a bit overwhelming. I do find the i of time clever, just make sure the point sits in the middle of the stack coming out of it. The typeface fits well with the industrial feel that you have going on.
Your first poster is also looking interesting. I like that the i of time is nicely integrated into a repeating shape, and there is a good amount of white space. The one rectangular shape in the right side doesn't quite fit however, try changing it to another shape. overall looking good!